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In the description, look down. by ~EmptyCasket:iconEmptyCasket:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Spiritual > Fixed


When all the world follows blindly,
What is it I should see?
The reign of unsure subjects,
The rain of divinity.
They live for You.
They die for You.
They fight only in Your name.
But that name ...
What is that name?

I choose not to idolize.
I choose not to fight.
I prefer to follow my eyes.
I see overrefinement.
I see false beliefs.
I’d rather not follow the lies.
To me it’s all another sort of police.
I see promotions for war,
I see promotions for peace.
I see it as something needed,
To make people feel at ease.
But why the Hell should it be?
It’s because of people like US.
It’s because of people like me.
©2005-2009 ~EmptyCasket
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Author's Comments

A.bout T.ime H.allowed E.ffusive I.ndividuals S.hould T.hink ... is the title I came up with. It wouldn't fit up there. ^


I came up with this in about 10 minutes ... I don't know where it came from. I wasn't feeling any specific emotion or anything. SO STRANGE! I might end up changing some of this, but so far people like it the way it is. Let me know please.

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~YurfRendenmein Feb 9, 2005, 8:48:47 PM
very nice...:)

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What causes people to write about the supernatural?
Is it because they are possessed by the Devil himself?
What do these scripts attempt to tell us?
Is there a paranormal world unseen in the existence of ours?

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~EmptyCasket Feb 9, 2005, 8:50:44 PM
Wow, thanks! You commented so quickly!

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"...So if they see me they won't stop me will they? I mean ... I have the right to be naked on a camera right?" my words on Yahoo Privacy policies; Webcams.
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~cosettecosette Feb 9, 2005, 8:51:43 PM
OH MY GOD!!! Fabulous, wonderful. That is my favorite poem of yours. It's inspired...I...love it. LOVE it. I...oh my God, I'm at a loss for words.

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Though your sins be as scarlet, they may be white as snow. Think about it...live it.
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~EmptyCasket Feb 9, 2005, 9:00:27 PM
Haha, thanks much ma'am! I feel funny now ... warm squeebly ... huh? Anyways ... you are awesome. Q(','Q) <=== he's a boxer! Don't have that for emoticons!!! YEAH! ... okay they might I dunno ...

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"...So if they see me they won't stop me will they? I mean ... I have the right to be naked on a camera right?" my words on Yahoo Privacy policies; Webcams.
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~EmptyCasket Feb 9, 2005, 9:02:16 PM
Q(','Q) had to re-do him ... HAD TO!

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"...So if they see me they won't stop me will they? I mean ... I have the right to be naked on a camera right?" my words on Yahoo Privacy policies; Webcams.
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~running-in-shadows Feb 10, 2005, 9:15:43 AM
Very good wooooo! catx x x

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Maybe if i just tried... i might still feel almost alive....
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~hippieartist Feb 10, 2005, 11:07:54 AM
i really really liked this. that is so awesome that it just came to you. i was just reading this guys poems and there was one in his book that said if thoughts and feelings dont just come SCREAMING out of you, you should not be writing. if you have to sit there for hours and think and think of what you want to write about, it wasnt meant to be. so i think you are in the right place. you are incredible tj. i enjoy reading your stuff so much. thank you for sharing.
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~EmptyCasket Feb 10, 2005, 1:14:02 PM
Ha HA! Thank you so much for commenting Kinzee. I like it best when you do ... since you are the one that brought me to this happy place. I'm glad you enjoy my poem.

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"...So if they see me they won't stop me will they? I mean ... I have the right to be naked on a camera right?" my words on Yahoo Privacy policies; Webcams.
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~hippieartist Feb 11, 2005, 10:49:21 AM
oh, no problem at all. i like to comment. i am glad that your love for this site has blossomed! thank you.
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